I think
this is much better than you last mic. I think you have some real potential. If I may offer a bit a advice. I love that you can do lots of voices, but I recommend not overstretching yourself. I would probably stick to one or two voices to begin with until they are polished nicely then branching out to others. That way you will have quality WITH the quantity. but you definitely have a good beginning and I look forward to future submissions.